I've also gone through and edited SR chapter one again, but it's not like you have to go back and reread the whole thing.
Changes in a nutshell:
- switched to past tense
- added paragraph after Suri's dream
- gave Juliana (ticket lady) her actual name (Tracy)
- altered a bit of dialogue
Yeah, that's about it.
UPDATE:
Ooh, yeah I finished editing chapter 2 - basically the same changed as above. Yay!
UPDATE:
Ooh, yeah I finished editing chapter 2 - basically the same changed as above. Yay!
I updated it on the original post, so the link on the fanfic page will remain the same.
On to chapter two now!
~Emma
P.S.
Got 13 books for summer reading :D
Also, thanks Destiny! :D
P.P.S
I'm also working on some tentative, totally unofficial covers for CS and S'sT. I'll put up the rough drafts when I think I've got something solid :)
P.P.S
I'm also working on some tentative, totally unofficial covers for CS and S'sT. I'll put up the rough drafts when I think I've got something solid :)
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